"The Exchange"
Endorphins gone wild
release infantile laughter
from the gleeful young!
Elder eyes reciprocate
untamed joy,
over and over again!
Young one stares back
ponders response,
catches breath,
refrains joyfully so!
Old child jublient,
awashed in tears,
cries happily ever after!
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This is so sweet. Speaks of laughter at all the stages of our life!
BTW, I noticed a couple of typos..
Gleeful---Gleaful
Reciprocate...recipricate
Hope you don't mind my saying so!
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That last stanza takes me home to my wide-eyed source of joy. This is lovely. Thank you.
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It seems such a long time since our kids were exactly like that.
sweet stages of laughter. untamed joy - that's laughter. well done.
Your banner is SO appropriate an illustration for this.
Wonderful! Kids, young and old, just bring on the good stuff!
What a sweetie! I can just tell from your great photos that his laughter went on and on and on! So much fun!
I enjoyed your haiku series. :)
I loved the phrase untamed joy also, marvelous!
I haven't really felt gleeful in some time, perhaps it is left to only the young at heart?
How lovely the laughter of childhood! :)
the best kind of contagion... a good old fashioned laugh.... excellent verse...
Loved it all. My favourite words were 'untamed joy'. It just seems to say it all.
Thanks
These are lovely in their truths.... old and young need one another. Great theme and words.
The contagiousness and endlessness of the exchange. Lovely.
The circle of life! It is great. I see a great family gathering or a family of many generations that lives together (what a special gift that would be). This is beautiful.
http://meeyauw-pad.blogspot.com/2008/03/one-single-impression-laughter.html
mom good job...
i like the last stanza:
"awashed in tears
cries happily ever after"
it's very passionate-sounding
also when you go to dr. h's tomorrow can you please stop by dr. kolb (the neurologist in her office's) and make an appt. or call dr magaerian (spelling check) to make one with him? i don't have contact info for either and dr h said to see a neurologist...the symptons are persisting but im not imminently worried
thank you so much for your help...i am very bery busy here at school
jubilient, awashed and tears, cries happily ever after.
that's a great new way for all stories to end.
your header photo series is just perfect with your poem! there is such joy in your beautiful words!
whenever i hear my child's laughter my heart wells up so... i don't know what it is... but it's like a tender pat on the back... yeah, the world is really a beautiful place
Great poem. I'm all for endorphins running amok!
Old and young alike
sparking joyful laughter shared ...
perfection embraced!
This series is wonderful!!! Thanks for your recent visit to my 'laughter" OSI at Sacred Ruminations ... and my condolences on the loss of your brother John.
Hugs and blessings,
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